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Project-Zero Creation Rebirth by ~SorrowFox:iconSorrowFox:



he wakes up in a healing chamber of herbal water. P0 looks around berly able to move in his attached mask of air suddenly the tube opens he falls out he sees a mirrorand looks in it 1 red eye 1 blue eye And his right arm is mecanical a rabbit anthro behind him reading a fur boy magizene  says good mornin project zero. "project zero couldnt remember anything" the rabbit says, "ready for the training course?"                                                                                                                                                              To Be Continued.........
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Submitted: October 26, 2007
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Project Zeros data age 21 sex male fur grayish blue race folf fox/wolf
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Sometimes I wonder who I am... what am I... Am I useless...what is my reson to live...Where am I from...but...do you know Who You Are?... [link]
It has potential and you have good ideas-just try to keep it a little bit more detailed and a little less short-you are doing a good job-don't give up on this!
alright i kinda wanna skip thru the cell corps part

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Sometimes I wonder who I am... what am I... Am I useless...what is my reson to live...Where am I from...but...do you know Who You Are?... [link]
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Your punctuation is abysmal, to the point of me having next to no idea what's going on. You absolutely blitz through the story, giving a sentence (or in this case, handful of words) for what should have its own paragraph (for example, Project Zero looking in the mirror). Please try to implement proper punctuation and sentence structure, because this could be a cool story if written well.

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"The day I fork out seventy bucks for an expansion pack is the day I swallow razor wire, pull the end out of my arse and floss myself to death!" Yahtzee Croshaw.
well in my opinion i do need to do this one over i just didnt have very much time that day muy others are better

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Sometimes I wonder who I am... what am I... Am I useless...what is my reson to live...Where am I from...but...do you know Who You Are?... [link]
I'll go take a look at them.

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"The day I fork out seventy bucks for an expansion pack is the day I swallow razor wire, pull the end out of my arse and floss myself to death!" Yahtzee Croshaw.
(Sorry for not have seen that... I was on a hurry to clear my message box)
I loved the style... it looks very interestin'.

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"A força pode ganhar a luta, mas é o estilo que ganha a multidão."
im planning on making them longer im impationt on making my storys ^^;x

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Sometimes I wonder who I am... what am I... Am I useless...what is my reson to live...Where am I from...but...do you know Who You Are?... [link]
Try to not force yourself: When I used to write, I forced my stories to be longer... and I became too bored to write again.
Try to follow your inspiration.

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"A força pode ganhar a luta, mas é o estilo que ganha a multidão."

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